Very nice and clean line drawing. All the objects read very clearly. I think the triadic color scheme is lit well, and overall very successful. The design doesn't read as a power plant though, and I can't see any sci-fi elements. I would watch the perspective, and make sure that objects like the top of the table, the trash compactor, and the lights all go back to the same vanishing point as the floor boards.
Agreeing with Robby, the triadic color piece looks great. I would perhaps, try and vary the line weight as it travels back in space. It might help give a better sense of depth.
Very nice and clean line drawing. All the objects read very clearly. I think the triadic color scheme is lit well, and overall very successful. The design doesn't read as a power plant though, and I can't see any sci-fi elements. I would watch the perspective, and make sure that objects like the top of the table, the trash compactor, and the lights all go back to the same vanishing point as the floor boards.
ReplyDeleteAgreeing with Robby, the triadic color piece looks great. I would perhaps, try and vary the line weight as it travels back in space. It might help give a better sense of depth.
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