Very nice speedpaint, Keith. The blue and green reflected light color on the structure works very well, and reads clearly. Nice use of photo texture on the broken areas of the aquaduct. I think the character could play a larger role in showing scale, but he's very hidden down there, and not noticeable on the first read.
Overall composition is nice. I like the human figure to suggest scale. The major aqueduct structure looks good and I like the suggested detail. The second broken structure in the background needs more definition in the front (the area coming out of the treeline), a stronger silhouette for the broken ends would strengthen your focal point. I like the bright specs suggesting leaves catching some light immediately behind the second broken structure. The structure the figure is standing on could benefit from a detail or suggestion that it is part of or a sister structure of the major aqueduct form. Right now its reading as an completely different material and overall design, and I think one thing to tie it with the other two major architectural structures would help tell a more consistent visual story. Overall, good work.
Very nice speedpaint, Keith. The blue and green reflected light color on the structure works very well, and reads clearly. Nice use of photo texture on the broken areas of the aquaduct. I think the character could play a larger role in showing scale, but he's very hidden down there, and not noticeable on the first read.
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