I like the overall feeling/story of this piece. It has a clear focal point being the center energy console thing. One issue I see though is that some of the perspective may be a bit off(specifically the platform that seems like it goes outside behind the energy console). The only other issue I see would be not separating the fg/mg/bg elements by changing the value. Generally the objects closer to the camera will be darker in value, and vice versa. Mostly a good piece though, just being nit-picky.
I like the overall feeling/story of this piece. It has a clear focal point being the center energy console thing. One issue I see though is that some of the perspective may be a bit off(specifically the platform that seems like it goes outside behind the energy console). The only other issue I see would be not separating the fg/mg/bg elements by changing the value. Generally the objects closer to the camera will be darker in value, and vice versa. Mostly a good piece though, just being nit-picky.
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