Overall very strong piece. The lighting/colors/value all work very well together. The only problem is that it lacks a strong focal point. My eye is drawn more to the white in the bg, rather than any of the foreground/middleground elements.
Good job on the composition and conveying the intended subject matter. There is also a nice sense of depth. Overall the piece is coming across as very monochromatic, adding some suggestions of deeper purple hues into the shadows could counter that and make the overall image more interesting colorwise without sacrificing some of the nicer tones you have in the sky and the midground. The foreground elements are still roughed in and need to be refined. Nice work.
Overall very strong piece. The lighting/colors/value all work very well together. The only problem is that it lacks a strong focal point. My eye is drawn more to the white in the bg, rather than any of the foreground/middleground elements.
ReplyDeleteGood job on the composition and conveying the intended subject matter. There is also a nice sense of depth. Overall the piece is coming across as very monochromatic, adding some suggestions of deeper purple hues into the shadows could counter that and make the overall image more interesting colorwise without sacrificing some of the nicer tones you have in the sky and the midground. The foreground elements are still roughed in and need to be refined. Nice work.
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